
So... it's all very well to criticize Pak and Van Lente for their portrayal of Canada in the new Alpha Flight series, but hold on!
How did Canadian-raised John Byrne actually DO in HIS depiction of Canada in the original Alpha Flight series?
Set the way-back machine to 1983 and find out...
Geography


The bulk of the action (a battle against the Inuit god Tundra) takes place in the Northwest Territories - likely not what has become Nunavut because Byrne describes it as north and west of Calgary. However, according to the CBC, the appearance of Tundra screws with the northern lights up in Resolute Bay which IS in today's Nunavut. Not really a problem, Tundra's disruption could be seen miles away. Certainly, while the ocean isn't far from the location, it doesn't look like it's happening on the arctic islands which are almost all part of Nunavut. Byrne uses the word Esquimaux to refer to the Native people of this land, an accepted if odd spelling of Eskimo, and here, the comic shows its age. The word is now considered both inappropriate and derogatory, as it's akin to the Greek's "barbarian", a word used by Algonquins to mean "eaters of raw meat" or by Montagnais to refer to any outsider. The proper term for Arctic Natives is Inuit or Innu. The fashion in Canada now is to use the proper Native language pronunciation for tribes, rather than their Western spelling corruptions, so the latter is probably more correct, just as my area's "Micmac Indians" are now referred to as Mi'kmaq (pronounced something like "Mìgmaw").
And finally, a little treat for Google Mappers: Mac and Heather's street address! 138 Laurier drive in Ottawa. Let's look it up... Oops! It doesn't exist! There's a Laurier AVENUE (both East and West), but pictures don't look at all like the Hudsons' residential area. Almost making me doubt the existence of Avengers Mansion...
Politics


French
Byrne has an interesting take on the use of French in the comic. Instead of bracketed "translated from the French" speech bubbles (or French sentences outright), he puts a French word here and there into what you understand to be conversations between all francophones. It's a symbolic way to do it and it mostly works. Except that his French is pretty terrible. On page 9, Aurora calls her students "mon petites" instead of "mes petites", using the masculine singular possessive instead of the feminine plural. Later, the French couple living at 138A Laurier has similar gender problems - the wife is called François, which is a man's name. Françoise is what Byrne meant.
Even when the French is fine, it's still not Canadian French, something that's a lot more obvious here than in the current series. Interjections like Sapristi, Sacre Bleu, and Nom du nom are Frenchism, not things you'd hear from Quebeckers (which the Beaubiers are) or other French Canadians. The little girls all call Aurora "Mam'selle", an attempt at making "Mademoiselle" (Miss) more colloquial, except that French Canadian schoolchildren are more likely to call any female grown-up, especially a teacher, "Madame". It just sounds slightly wrong, as if we're in France.
Byrne's off to a good start regardless (I think I'll continue to do a retro-piece as a companion to my new Alpha reviews), at least achieving an iconic depiction of Canada and like Van Lente and Pak, focusing on the characters more than the geography (except when the geography comes alive and punches superheroes, of course!).
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